I noticed that you tend to repeat certain points. It might help to condense them.

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I noticed you tend to repeat certain points; consider condensing them.

To improve clarity, you might want to condense your repeated points.

The presentation suffered from repetitive points; it would benefit from condensation.

I noticed some repetition; could you condense those points?

I observed redundancy in your presentation. A more concise approach would be beneficial.

Hey, you're saying the same thing a few times. Try to shorten it up.

You said some things more than once. Make it shorter.

To habitually say or do something multiple times.

To make something shorter and more compact.