Your approach is effective, but I think it could be more focused on the key objectives.

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Your approach is effective, but we need to focus more on the key objectives.

I think we could make your approach even better by focusing more on the key objectives.

While your approach is good, let's discuss how to better align it with the key objectives.

My approach is effective, but I need to refine it to better address the key objectives.

Your methodology is efficient; however, greater emphasis on the primary objectives is warranted.

It's working well, but we should try to zero in on the main goals.

What you're doing is good, but let's focus more on the important things.

The most important goals or aims.

More concentrated or directed.