Learn · Sentences Bargaining

I understand the need for your store to maintain a margin, but I believe that lowering the price by even a small amount would make this sale much more attractive to me.

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Sentence

Narrator

I understand the need for your store to maintain a margin, but I believe that lowering the price by even a small amount would make this sale much more attractive to me.

Study notes

How to use in different contexts

Negotiating a Price

I understand your need for a margin, but a slight price reduction would make this more appealing.

Expressing Disappointment

While I appreciate your store's need for profit, the price is still too high for me.

Making a Polite Request

Could you consider lowering the price a bit? I'm very interested in purchasing this.

Explaining a Decision

I decided against the purchase because the price, even with a small reduction, was still beyond my budget.

Rephrased versions

Formal

I acknowledge the necessity of maintaining your profit margin; however, a modest price decrease would significantly enhance the attractiveness of this sale.

Casual

I get that you need to make money, but even a little discount would make me much more likely to buy this.

Simpler English

I know you need to make a profit, but a lower price would make me buy it.

Phrases to learn

maintain a margin

To keep a certain level of profit.

lower the price

To reduce the cost of something.

more attractive

More appealing or desirable.