You’ve shown great initiative, but I think with more focus, you can deliver an even more impactful outcome.

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You've shown great initiative, but focusing more will lead to a better outcome.

Your initiative is commendable, however, increased focus could significantly improve results.

While your initiative is impressive, let's work on improving your focus for even greater impact.

Your initiative is fantastic! With a bit more focus, you'll achieve even more.

Your demonstrated initiative is commendable; however, enhanced focus would yield a more substantial result.

You've been really proactive, but if you concentrate more, you'll do even better.

You've done a great job starting things, but paying more attention will make your work better.