I believe your argument would be stronger if you avoided too much jargon.

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Your argument would be more persuasive if you avoided jargon.

I try to avoid using too much jargon in my writing to make it more accessible.

Would your argument be stronger if you used less technical language?

If you reduced the jargon, your point would be clearer.

The efficacy of your argument would be enhanced by a reduction in specialized terminology.

Your argument would be better if you didn't use so much technical stuff.

Your argument would be clearer with less jargon.

To refrain from using specialized or technical language.

A more persuasive and convincing argument.