It’s clear that you’ve put a lot of effort into this, but next time try to simplify your explanation.

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Your work shows a lot of effort, but try simplifying your explanation next time.

It's evident you've invested significant time, however, a more concise explanation would be beneficial.

I see you've worked hard on this, but let's aim for a simpler explanation next time.

While the effort is clear, a more streamlined explanation would improve clarity.

Your dedication is apparent, however, a more concise explanation is recommended for future submissions.

You clearly put in a lot of work, but try to make it easier to understand next time.

It shows you tried hard, but keep it simple next time.

To dedicate significant time and energy to something.

To make your explanation easier to understand.