I like your initiative, but perhaps you could focus more on the details.

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I appreciate your initiative, but focusing more on the details would be beneficial.

Your initiative is great, but consider paying closer attention to the details.

I like your idea, but let's make sure we're all on the same page regarding the details.

The project is moving forward well, but we need to ensure more attention is given to the finer details.

I commend your initiative; however, greater attention to detail is warranted.

That's a good start, but maybe try to be a bit more precise.

I like what you're doing, but pay more attention to the small things.

To pay greater attention to the specific aspects or elements.

Your willingness to take action or lead.