How about revising this section for clarity?

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Please revise this section for clarity.

I suggest revising this section for better clarity.

Could you review this section and let me know if it needs clarification?

Let's work together to revise this section and improve its clarity.

It is recommended that this section be revised for enhanced clarity.

Let's clean up this section to make it clearer.

Make this part easier to understand.

To edit and improve a text to make it easier to understand.